OK on to the second chapter. This time with a little more focus on other characters.
I am really interested in some feedback at this point, especially of the “negative” variety. Let me know what you think sucks about this comic, or what makes you think, “well this comic is ok, but it would be so much better if…” Drop me a mail at firstname.lastname@example.org and critisize me! I personally feel that I have a lot more to learn when it comes to pacing and storyarching a webcomic, which I have discovered is remarkably different to printed comics. It has been an educational experience to say the least!
your help=much appreciated!